Learning Goals:  I can     I am practising to

• Brainstorm my ideas.

• Use my brainstorm to help me write my story.

• Check each sentence makes sense.

• Organise my ideas into paragraphs.

Title:Africa

Written by:Sanchia

I am going to Africa because there are fun roller coasters that you can ride on in the future. I went on a Jet Plane because it's fast and fun. I am bringing a blow-up bed, with a pump. I came with my family because they are the ones who were meant to pay,I bought $1,000 dollars. I brought Jeffrey and pepper because they are my cats,clothes,toys. Sometimes it can snow in Africa.

Proofreading Goals:  I can     I am practising to

• Use capital letters are being used for the beginning of my sentences and names and the pronoun “I”.

• Use full stops, exclamation marks, question marks and commas in the right place.

• Use spell check to correct my spelling.